Monday 18 October 2010

Panic Underground

The train, already rolling along at snail pace, finally shrieks to a determined stop. Outside, the deep darkness of the tunnel, heavy and silent. The carriage is crowded, more so than normal on this day of delays, and one or two people let out a sigh. Others, used to such incidents, continue reading books and newspapers.

Without the sound of the train’s electricity, other sounds fill the gap. The buzzing of music seeping from headphones, the beeps of smartphones and snippets of conversation.
One minutes passes. No announcements are made over the train’s intercom system, and eyes begin darting around the carriage. People put their weight onto another foot, and lean heads and shoulders against windows and doors. The temperature seems to rise by a degree or two.

La fenêtre s’il vous plaît” requests one lady, but those nearby can’t open it. They’ve already tried and it’s stuck. People smile and scoff, but this is an older generation of train. Just one window in the carriage is open, and the oxygen is already starting to taste second-hand.

Two minutes become three and still there is no announcement and no movement on the line. People twist in their tiny individual spaces, trying to find an extra few inches of room. Conversations stop and faces turn to frowns. A quick look at watches, then mental calculations about missed connections and appointments.

After four minutes, suddenly there is movement and raised voices by a doorway. A girl is struggling for breath and looks ready to fall. She tries to open the door, but it is locked tight inside the tunnel. ‘I need air’ she says and people try to cool her and calm her down. A ripple of nervousness spreads outwards. All we need now is someone collapsing in here.

She is moved close to the single open window and drinks in the stale air of the tunnel. A problem averted for now, but who will be the next to panic if the train doesn’t start moving soon?

People now become acutely aware of their environment. We are now no longer in a train but instead closed in a tight metallic box deep underground. Without any visual clues, we don’t even know where we are. There is no immediate escape - all we can do is stand and wait.

And wait. Five minutes, six minutes, and the thin threads that hold society together are starting to strain. How many more minutes before they snap all together? Our mental barter for such close physical proximity is the fact that something is moving us forward to our destination, but when the movement stops, the odours, the coughs and the warmth of people’s breath become ever more intensified. We don’t even stay this close to our families for such lengths of time.

Seven minutes, eight minutes now, but what would happen if we were stuck here for 30 minutes, an hour, two hours? Look around at the faces. Who would break down and who would become a leader? How would our new micro-society organise itself? Would we make space for each other, let people take it in turns to sit down, tell each other about our lives above ground, and wait for help? Or would we instead silently form escape groups and frantically try and break through doors and windows?

Nine minutes then ten, and happily an unexpected rumble as the engine is engaged and the train shunts forward. Smiles and relief and a return to our individual spaces and routines. 10 minutes only, but time seems twice as long in the rarefied atmosphere of the Metro. 10 minutes, we tell ourselves, not 69 days, but we're still glad to see the light at the end of the tunnel!


Anonymous said...

makes you want to use the bus instead?

Victoria said...


Denise Covey said...

Wow! A scary story. I was there..:)

My French Blog

Anonymous said...

Extend that to 69 days.

via said...

That sounds like a nightmare.

I was on the tube once in London when the train suddenly stopped, and as the minutes ticked by we all sat very still like before, except for one guy who threw down his briefcase and kicked it across the floor with an expletive. We all kind of froze up, because it’s so much worse when someone starts freaking out.

Glad that young woman ended up being all right.

Cergie said...

Imagine que tu sois dans un sous marin !
Il est vrai que n'importe qui ne peut être dans un sous marin. Ni sur une base de l'Antartique pendant les longs mois d'hiver. L'horreur.

(Merci de m'avoir parlé de Depardon, c'est une exposition que j'ai bien l'intention d'aller voir lorsqu'il n'y aura plus de roblèmes de transport.)

FotoMarg said...
This comment has been removed by the author.
FotoMarg said...

Well written Adam. Your story carried me along at a fast pace unlike the train you were in. (Sorry about my bad spelling previously.)

Philippa said...

This minute-by-minute post reminds me of other experiences of being with a group of strangers in a peculiar situation that might be just normal delay, or might signal something more profound at work. I know the feeling of looking around, wondering who would take charge if things got completely unglued, wondering how I would respond myself. Then the lights come on again and the train/subway/elevator restarts, and half an hour later, those thoughts are forgotten. There is a certain genius to capturing those brief, wild, forgotten moments when we wonder if that oddball sitting next to us is what stands between us and extinction. Bravo.

Fickle Cattle said...

Hahahaha. Very nice dichotomy.

Anonymous said...

Try living in London. People sometimes get stuck underground for two hours!

DaiLy News said... - Daily News

Sab said...

An excellent piece Adam. I enjoyed reading it - great thoughts. Not nice when it happens and I sometimes get like the young woman.

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...
Twitter Instagram Write Bookmark this page More

Design by Free WordPress Themes | Bloggerized by Lasantha - Premium Blogger Themes | Premium Wordpress Themes